i like the shot - period. I thought a lot about minor things like that the girl looks a bit ... dunno, expecting, bored or simply wants to look cool - as i dunno what you wanted to transport this isnґt a fault rather then my feeling. A fault could be that the shot looks crocked if i used the back as basis (the ornament on the wall goes down from left to right). Something i really like is the clearity ... the nice light (looks like sheґs at home in her bed) ... the contrast between her obvious youth (at least i think sheґs very young) and the her black stay-ups (which are more often seen at well grown women rather then young girls).
All in all itґs a very interesting shot with loads of aspects.