This sea is covered with adolescents
learning to walk on waves, upright,
sometimes resting their arms on the currents,
sometimes gripping a stiff beam of sunlight.
I lie on the broad beach, an angled shape, cut perfectly,
and I ponder them like travelers landing.
An infinite fleet of yawls. I wait to see
a false step, or at least a grounding
up to knee in the diaphanous swell
beneath their measured progress, sounding.
But they are slim and calm - as well,
they've learned to walk on waves - and standing.
i want to be adolescent... do you want?
Sat 23 Jul 2005 18:52
comments (15 from 48)
Sat 23 Jul 2005 19:03
sure.. i want to walk on leaves and standing... but also falling, maybe..
beautiful words.. and so beautiful sunset.. excellent diagonal and tones in it
Sat 23 Jul 2005 19:24
Really a nice composition that is beautiful to see.
Sat 23 Jul 2005 19:27
Very well composed and presented, great atmosphere and tone! Regards.
Sat 23 Jul 2005 20:02
Nice tones, a very beautiful light... a nice moment you have captured here mircea...
Sat 23 Jul 2005 20:12
Evening on the Doorstep
Sitting on the doorstep
Watching clouds go by
All the changing patterns
High up in the sky
Sunlight fading gently
Slowly in the west
Jet trails spreading lazily
Miles above the rest
I wonder where they’re going
I wonder where they’ve been
Ever changing scene
Just like all the patterns
We weave within our life
Never know our destiny……
Comforting …. or strife
Sat 23 Jul 2005 20:53
Great contrast and beautiful colour!
Sat 23 Jul 2005 21:23
excellent composition and stunningly beautiful
Sat 23 Jul 2005 21:52
Well presented, good low light excellent and beautiful sky
A V E
Sat 23 Jul 2005 21:56
very well done Mircea!
Sat 23 Jul 2005 22:01
Very beautifult, the words and the pictures. The frame is very good on this pictures, everything is good, ju have do a good jobb Mircea..
Sat 23 Jul 2005 22:06
Wonderful golden light. Have a good weekend.