Michael, I like very much your photograph.
If you do not mind, I would like to make some suggestion.
To me is the most interesing the bottom part of the image. The figures are like ghosts (first vision). Tfigures represent instability or just imressionistic vision of our life (second vision). Can be much more visions.
Because I see the most interesting here the peoplr figures, I would crop out upper part of the image (like in attached variant). Of course, you can have other ideas that are more important to you. In this case any idea needs to be presented in more definite way.
Good luck in your photography! мой вариант фото