Photo First expirience in portrait photo by Evgeny Egoroff

Hello!

Please, tell me about my mistakes, besides I found by myself:
- blur on the hand and the coat;
- the sight of model is staring towards camera.

published:

Fri 24 Nov 2006 09:23

equipment:

digital camera Nikon D70
lens Sigma AF 24-70mm F2.8 EX DG

permanent link:

https://www.photoforum.ru/photo/325978/

comments (9 from 9)

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Vigen Hakhverdyan #1 Fri 24 Nov 2006 09:49

хороший портрет!

Berenice Kauffmann Abud - AFIAP #2 Fri 24 Nov 2006 10:04

I like the composition and soft effect!
Beautiful expression!!

System #5 Fri 24 Nov 2006 11:04

the photo has been reuploaded
фотография была заменена

silvia marmori #6 Fri 24 Nov 2006 16:07

i am not an expert in portraits, but i will tell you my real humble opinion..
i don't mind at all, that the model is looking at the camera!
sometimes, it add a real feeling , that contact..
i see blur her hand and also a bit blur her coat.. (not important the coat, in fact)
what i also felt is that hand, that arm in that position, distract a bit..
i am not sure if because it is blur, and that means a movement or because the black glove... (i think that even not blur, the position is bit like forced)
the light and bg is really nice captured, as much as her face and expression
i hope it was useful.. as i said, i am not an expert in portraits

Evgeny Egoroff #9 mon 27 Nov 2006 15:53

Thank you for your constructive opinion! I'll try to remember it while capturing another portraits

Sergej Kobcev #7 Fri 24 Nov 2006 17:04

Портрен неплохой, но мешает (отвлекает взгляд) нестолько смазанная перчатка, сколько яркий черный цвет. Удачи.

Evgeny Egoroff #10 mon 27 Nov 2006 15:53

Согласен, спасибо!

Olga Kulyashova #8 Sat 25 Nov 2006 00:02

соглашусь с Сильвией, черная перчатка отвлекает...а портрет хороший

Evgeny Egoroff #11 mon 27 Nov 2006 15:53

Убедили, я понял! smile

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