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Спасибо за комментарий.
На фотографии лист не белый изначально. Я запекал бумагу в духовке, чтобы её покоробило и изменился цвет. Ибо если все предметы достаточно старые - белая современная бумага там лишняя.
Не очень хорошо понимаю в натюрмортах, ставлю, в основном, по восприятию...
Как любителю, не нравится то, что почти все объекты "выходят" за край кадра, качество, идея и свет понравились ))
Благодарю за внимание и совет.
well here my sincere one..
i like the tones, so much. they go well with the subject, with the mood of it..
i also like your choice of elements..
about composition, even there is a stong diagonal coming from a vertex, i'd crop a bit at bottom side.. i see too much "weight" at top...
and also, and please, this is JMHO, i'd add sharpenss a bit, just a bit at the flower..
i wait for next crop.. but i like this image.. it has a feeling, what is much more valuable, sometimes, than any technique consideration..
Thank you very much. You advise are much usefull.
Great composition, nice tones. Congrats
Thank you.
I like this composition a lot - Aleksey
Nice tones with an old-style feeling.
best + >sim
You have captured a good atmospere with very good tones. reagrds
Very good composition!
Nice tones and mood!
Beautiful detail and a good choice of, tonality inh this still life!
Regards
Thanks to all people, who attached attention to my work. Yous oppinion is important for me.