Photo "Still waiting"

Alexei Malykhin #1 Sun 27 May 2007 08:31

I like the tones and exposure, but the composition does not live up to them. I can't see any good focal points, guiding lines or shapes for the eyes, etc. As a reporting piece, this is excellent, but from the artistic point of view, I would suggest trying to experiment a bit with different perspectives and angles. If possible, I would go back to the subject really thinking of composition and ways to make it interesting and expressive on its own.

Best of luck!

Stefano Pasquini #2 mon 28 May 2007 04:44

I like very much tones and composition.
Then, I love boats...
999

Joaquim Simoes #3 mon 28 May 2007 18:26

Beautiful!
jose

Sergey_N #4 Wed 30 May 2007 08:21

I like your sepia idea, but don't like the sky. Maybe possible something to do to the sky?

Pretty #5 Wed 30 May 2007 16:40

теплые тона
приятная работа

Roberto Palladini #6 Thu 31 May 2007 09:58

The tones of this photo are beautifulst, if you succeed to make the sky more intense you would be one wonderful image. Regards

Berenice Kauffmann Abud - AFIAP #7 Thu 31 May 2007 13:00

I like the composition and tones... Beautiful!!!!!
Forte abraco!

Valentin Bondarenko #8 Fri 1 Jun 2007 18:17

Beautifully presented work. Color sepii has liked. Well done Valentine

Aleksej Patlakh #9 Sat 2 Jun 2007 12:20

Интересная работа!

Andrei Zhilin #10 Sun 3 Jun 2007 12:36

Very nice object.
Excellent shot.

alessandro mezzenzana #11 Sun 3 Jun 2007 13:24

excellent work and tone

Luis Lima #12 Sun 3 Jun 2007 16:12

good color

Diana Viu #13 mon 4 Jun 2007 20:03

very very nice! Like a drawing!