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Сергей Степанов Сергей Степанов #1 сб 30 май 2009 12:29

Красота. Веерные облака улыбаюсь


kristine sergejeva kristine sergejeva #2 сб 30 май 2009 13:09

ok, in my opinion the only perfect thing in this photo is the beauty of the moment, which, in my opinion, is captured quite unsuccessfully.
composition is... with many unnecessary details. at least i dont like the huge part which could be imagined as a reflection of cloads, but i have to imagine then very far.
technique - no technique - how i saw it so i shot it.
sorry, but feel somehow dissapointed that such a nice potential image is left behind.
please dont take anything said as offence as it's only my subjective opinion.


snowrain snowrain #4 сб 30 май 2009 17:34

"composition is... with many unnecessary details"

What, for example?)


"technique - no technique - how i saw it so i shot it"

panorama)
at least 6 times I saw))



thanks for the criticism)


kristine sergejeva kristine sergejeva #5 сб 30 май 2009 19:26

"for example" was mentioned in my first comment. right after the sentence you quote.
sorry, but i think from what you saw it was possibl to make great piece of art, which is not done is this case.


snowrain snowrain #6 сб 30 май 2009 19:44

ok, "for example" left without a detailed response))
you wrote that could have been done
but the exact details in this shot, you seem to be redundant?
sorry, but while I'm not ready to agree with your point of view)


kristine sergejeva kristine sergejeva #7 вс 31 май 2009 02:46

yes, i think u r right, i have left our large part of .. what. of shadows. sorry, as i somehow was sure, that i mentioned it. so, yes, although i cant deny an influnce of th shadows in this pic, i do not like neither this influence, nor these shadows, which as i mentioned before, could be presumably imagined as reflection-on-earth of wonderful clouds. i dont lik also bushes on the right and left sides. i would put more attention to clouds and their-coming-out as smoke from far treess. and middle line would go into the skies as skies would occupy bigger part of the composition. and maybe shot would be done not in front of the image but from lower perspective.
ok, i know how unpleasent it can be when one decide to criticize our art work. for that is needed also big patience to explain evrything as calm as possible. this patience i dont have улыбаюсь , and i have just ideas and some knowledge, which is usually swept away by these new ideas.
so sorry for daring to criticize your pic but i hope that it least it gave what to think.
all the best.


Berenice Kauffmann Abud  - AFIAP Berenice Kauffmann Abud - AFIAP #8 вс 31 май 2009 08:25

A beautiful image!!!! [9/9/9]