Фото "Бильярдистка"

Сергей Мажаров #1 чт 17 дек 2009 21:25

Стол получился здорово.

Сергей99 #4 сб 19 дек 2009 11:11

спасибо, мне тоже нравится, особенно ножки стола

Юлия Асновина #2 пт 18 дек 2009 02:36

Первое впечатление-динамично, Пригляделась-обрезано по живому, угол стены совершенно лишний.

Andre Schwaller #3 пт 18 дек 2009 11:57

ohh she should rest on both feet same weight. the hand is to far form the "white/paly" ball, the queue should be hold not at the end... correct is how she rests the queue on the hand and the chin is in line with the queue and almost touches the queue. so she has still potential to improve her play.
now to the picture, the wall sure does disturb, the glossy shoes i don't like it does pull the eyes to a part of the picture where nothing else is interesting.
I do like the reflection on the wooden part of the table(arm queue). the light is nice. dof should be more narrow so the "16" on the wall gets more blur.

But i would not write all this if i would not like the picture. it's nice so far but sure there is room for improvement.
(slight wider lens get the girl more in the picture and still have the table not in a angle would be a nice try).

Best Regards
Andre

Nikolay Semyonov #5 сб 19 дек 2009 16:35

отличная графика ,и все же... стена слева мешает))

andrew bart #6 вс 20 дек 2009 00:50

Классная работа... Мои поздравления...

Сергей99 #9 чт 31 дек 2009 23:58

благодарю!
С Новым годом!
удачи и успеха!