Фото "Спит московская деревня."

Bernd Ratfisch #1 ср 9 апр 2014 18:33

Very well composed landscape, marvellous light and mood. Congratulations!

Richard Knudson #3 ср 9 апр 2014 19:59

Bernd and the photographer have a nuanced artist's eye that I apparently need to develop.

Richard Knudson #2 ср 9 апр 2014 19:58

Certainly portrays a dreary day. The left and right seem to be two compositions fighting for the viewer's attention. See variant for the effect of saturation and brightness control. мой вариант фото

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Bernd Ratfisch #5 сб 12 апр 2014 16:17

Your variant is a very imposing version! For my opinion, the foggy mood is seen better, when the saturation is in sparse use. That's why I would prefer the original version.
It's difficult to find the balance for the best contrast in an image like this. Your variant gets more sunshine into the scene, but I see dense fog over the landscape.

Richard Knudson #6 пн 14 апр 2014 07:46

I agree. Now a few days later, I see that the original is clearly about the cold dreary fog. In my variant, it is not very clear what mood is to be conveyed.

Сергей Литвинов #4 сб 12 апр 2014 13:15

Приятная работа ...