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Not bad first try... the lighting looked a bit harsh... on her skin... did you bounce the lights or straight on? I like very much her pose and eye contact with the camera.
To be your first time, not this nothing badly.
A very good first try. If you wish light to be softer, try putting some thin white fabric between lights and model. If you are happy with this image I would leave the lights as they are.. Interesting model.