You leave me wioth my eye drawn strongly into a black hole. The only aspect of the image that attracts and peases the eye is the less than 10% of the frame in focus. In any macro you must have at least 20% and greater of the are in focus with a good arrangements of the blurs. Here the red just diostracts the eye and does not make it with the greens.
Peter, thanks for the time you took to critic my picture .. but the fact is that all what you think is disturbing, it`s, for me, the qualities of this picture. I really don`t care about the rules of % in macro or in any art. Feelings (for me) are the only rules. Let`s say that here, we don`t share the same feelings.